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Little bit late but here is the feedback from our presentation of the animatic etc:

"Good idea to have text at the bottom to help explain your narrative – correct the typos.
Type out any written text in your animatic and make those frames slightly slower so the viewer can
read them.
Make the shopping section clearer; perhaps make the blue pig ‘blue’?
If it has potential to be a game – show a visual of what the game would look like"


About Richard Whillock

A beardy bloke who is pleased by the production of puppets and the set-up of stop-motion stuffs. A love for the scruffy, the textured and the original.

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